Villanelle comes home to her family and faces off with her mother. Does the story work? Three Certified Story Grid Editors break it down for you.
Initial Observations:
Mel - A documentary about life in remote Russia that has a tragic, but expected ending.
Parul - If I’m looking for a silver lining - here is a good way to look at how one might introduce a villain’s backstory
Randy - WTH?
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